Friday, 19 June 2015

Marcus - Kia Manawanui Narrative Writing Framework


KIA MANAWANUI SYNDICATE
(BE BIG HEARTED)
Narrative writing framework - MYTHS AND LEGENDS

T
Title
Give your story a captivating title
- make people want to keep reading
O
Orientation
Set the scene - where is the story set? Who are the main characters?
Describe the setting and characters in detail.
P
Problem
What problem is your main character facing? Give lots of detail. How does the problem affect the different characters in the story?
S
Solution
How does the main character solve the problem? What skills or strategies are used? What do you want people to think about/learn when reading your myth?

Title
Relate it to the main character(s) and action in your story.
      The apocalypse
Orientation
Who?
Characters - describe your characters in detail.

What?
What is happening? What is the situation?
What is happening to your characters?
What are they doing?
What are they saying?
When?
When is your story set?
Where?
Describe the setting of your myth.
Bob : is the leader of the resistance. he takes charge and guides them.
Eddie:is the brain of the resistance. He Makes the options for the group in everything
Derrick : is the muscle of the resistance. He protects the group from anyone or anything.
Undead army:A army of skeletons tearing down everything in there path.
Xan:He is the king of the undead army taking over the worlds with his dark magic.     

An empty street betrayed by its people. A lifeless site full of darkness and fear. The whistling wind was whipping me back. Shadows creeping behind my back.

Feeling horrified like something goary is about to happen.  Wind punches my face with all its might. Pain and fear running down my spine.

My shivering bones, feeling like my bones are made of jelly. Souls moaning for their freedom. I wish i was home in the calm fields.
Problem
What is the cause of the problem?
What are the characters doing? Have you describe their feelings?
Include language features to support key ideas.
  • Simile
  • Metaphors
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Personification
Include some engaging dialogue in your story. “ “
Problem
A huge green beam strikes down to earth and gets rid of all of the humans flesh.Three people escape and hide in an underground bunker. They try to find out what's going on. Derrick Leaves the bunker to see if there's any survivors. Eddie was think of all the things that could be happening. Bob found a few weapons in the bunker and made sure that they were safe.
Derrick comes back with bad news. He explained what happened with the humans and who did this. He told them that the beam didn’t kill them but turned them into skeletons. He also saw an a huge skeleton holding a yellow orb.    
The world's lights were turned of.
Water turned red.

Solution
How is this problem solved?
What is the moral of the story?
Eddie Came up with a plan to take the orb, he thinks it can bring back the humans and all the peace. He checked the plan with Bob, Bob thought it wouldn't work but it was his only option. Derrick showed them the way to there base. they all saw Xan the skeleton king, they wanted to turn back. They thought about their lives before this when it was better. Derrick left he ran back in fear. Bob gave his speech for encouragement. He talked about what to expect out there. 1.2.3 they ran for the orb with speed in there legs. Non stop fighting of the skeleton army they got half way till Bob knew there were too many to fight of. He gave up and just dropped to the floor. His team saw him and followed the fell, then suddenly Bang a huge noise acre s it is Derrick with a cart and guns attacked. Never have they ever been glad to see him, Destroying everything in his path getting closer and closer to them. Till he sees a red light but he doesn't stop he goes faster. too fast he couldn't start bang ran them over.

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